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Cop Story 2-02

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You know those moments when you're bored queueing in a supermarket and you start silently judg- Iii mean trying to deduce something about people in the queue from their shopping? This is one of those moments.

Gosh, Chauncey, I know you want to get away from all that paperwork and do some Real Policing but can you try harder to not look like you're actually hoping that woman's entire family is currently held hostage by a mobster who's also an international terrorist which you'll brilliantly capture with no casualties thus proving what a good copper you are?

I updated layouts on SJ so come take a look (still tweaking stuff but still)! :D
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This page is very, very well executed. The bricks, first of all! I like how you made them pretty faint (if they weren't, they'd probably distract the reader from the speech bubbles and characters), but still very realistic. The folds on the characters' clothing are excellent. And once again, the expressions! :D 

Chauncey...he's so broken. Those lines under his eyes, the tiredness...the sick-of-it-all-ness. In the last panel, he does look very desperate and eager to do some "real policing"! I love the change of expression that's the result of this simple exchange between him and the woman.